Post by yothom on Apr 25, 2008 14:15:15 GMT -5
heres my comic It has some magic In It.
Hunter
Page one
Panel one: From a distance a black humanoid figure in a cloak with fifteen more behind move south in a snowy forest like area.
Panel two: Fifty men in silver chain Amour with oval round shields that have fairly large diamonds on them and saw like swords jump out of the forest charging toward them.
Hunter: Defensive positions! (He has a black cloak but you probably new that. Also the same sword as the soldiers)
Panel three: All fifteen soldiers turn toward the enemy in black chain armour with silver swords, slightly curved toward them.
Panel four: The fifteen men squat down a little with there swords In front of them.
Panel five: from the distance the fifteen men stand as they were with Hunter next to them in the same position, and the enemy charging toward them at least fifteen feet away.
Page two
Panel one: A chain like sword flies in the air with a little blood on it and next to it.
Panel two: One of the fifteen soldiers cut threw an enemy with his sword. An allied soldier next him almost on the ground.
Panel three: Hunterýs sword turns blackish, purple and easily cuts threw three enemy soldiers.
Panel four: An enemy soldier stabs an allied soldier in the stomach, his sword goes completely threw.
Panel five: Soon after the battle there were fifty enemy bodies lying on the ground, and two allied bodies.
Page three
Panel one:
Hunter: How many are dead?
Panel two:
Soldier: Two Sir.
Panel three: Hunter starts walking.
Hunter: Alright letýs keep moving.
Panel four: The men continue walking south.
Panel five:
Soldier: Sir how much longer until we finish the rout?
Panel six: Hunter turns his head.
Hunter: Soon.
Page four
Panel one: They come over a hill and see the enemy village.
Panel two: Hunter turns toward them.
Hunter: Iým sending you four of you back to the camp and tell them that weýve cleared the rout.
Panel three: Hunter points at four men and they leave for camp.
Panel four: At night twenty enemy soldiers come charging out of the forest like the last squad but with torches.
Page five
Panel one: The nine allied soldiers hop up as fast as they can.
Panel two:
Hunter: Defensive positions!
Panel three: All allied soldiers put there swords In front of them.
Panel four: eight of the enemiesý soldiers get hit by flaming arrows.
Panel five: the enemy start running back to the camp in fright.
Page six
Panel one: Eighty solders including the four that was sent for them marches toward hunter and his men.
Page seven
Panel one: The army halts.
Panel two: The leader walks up too Hunter in a cape and gray chain armour.
Panel three: Hunter starts walking towards him.
Panel four: They had had walked up too each other and looked each other in the eye.
Leader cage: Good work Hunter.
Hunter: Alright but Iým going to need to come with you.
Page eight
Panel one: The leader looks up.
Panel two: The leader looks back Into Hunters eye
Leader cage: We donýt need you for this.
Panel three: Hunter`s eyebrows go down.
Hunter: why wouldnýt you? Iým your son, Iým stronger then your entire army!
Panel four: Because We have enough men.
Page nine
Panel one:
Hunter: -Puts his head closer- I donýt care how many men you have! You donýt know how many soldiers there are in that village you cant just walk in there and win! Youýve only won when I sent in some of my men!
Panel two: Leader cage places his hand on Hunters shoulder.
Leader cage: -Places his hand on Hunters shoulder- (Sighs) Alright ill let you fight. Now get some sleep so we can take the village tomorrow.
Panel three:
Hunter: -Turns around-
Leader Cage: I will see you tomorrow.
Panel four:
Hunter: -Walks away-
Page ten
Panel one: The next morning the army brought out two trebuchets.
Panel two:
Hunter: Are they enough?
Leader cage: Yes. They donýt have very strong walls.
Panel three: The trebuchets stop in position.
Soldier: Ready!
Leader Cage: Fire!!
Panel four: the soldier swings his hammer toward the nail in the trebuchet.
Page eleven
Panel one: The trebuchets Lift up about too throw flaming boulders.
Panel two: The enemy run from the boulders as they fly towards there walls.
Panel three: The boulders hit the walls making an explosion.
Page twelve
Panel one: The Trebuchets Fire again.
Panel two: The flaming boulders fly towards the enemy walls.
Panel three: The Boulders destroy the walls making stone pieces fly.
Page thirteen
Panel one:
Leader Cage: Send in the Infantry.
Panel two:
Horseman: Send In the Infantry!!
Panel three: The two front rows of men start marching.
Page fourteen
Panel one:
Hunter: How many?
Leader cage: Thirty each row.
Panel two: Enemy arrows fly up in the air.
Panel three: The soldierýs squat down and the front row of men put there octagon shaped shields in front of them and the back soldiers put them in the air.
Page fifteen
Panel one: A couple allied soldiers fall to the ground.
Panel two: The soldiers put there shields down and start running.
Panel three: Allied archers fire arrows at the enemy helping the charging soldiers.
Panel four: The allied Infantry cut threw the enemy swordsman with there swords.
Panel five:
Leader cage: Ok hunter you can move in.
Panel six: Hunter and is men disappear in black fog.
Page sixteen
Panel one: All enemy soldiers fighting get pushed back by a long black line with a little purple outline.
Panel two: The enemy continue fighting back.
Panel three: One allied soldier Cuts threw an enemy`s leg.
Panel four: Hunter slams his sword onto an enemy`s helmet.
Panel five: Hunter looks around and sees the most of his allies had died from arrows that looked like they had come from his army`s direction thinking It was the enemy
Panel six: Fire all arrows.
Page seventeen
Panel one: Hunter Puts his sword threw an enemy`s stomach.
Panel two: A ton of enemy`s get hit by arrows from his allies. An arrow goes threw the back of his right shoulder.
Panel three: Hunter pulls the arrow out of his shoulder.
Panel four: Hunter puts some of his magic on his wound to stop the bleeding.
Panel five: Hunter raises his left hand at the enemy.
Panel six: Hunter than pushes the enemy back with full force with his magic causing a shock to the enemy giving them a heart attack making them die as soon as hit.
Page eighteen
Panel one: Hunter looks up in the air and sees a lot more arrows coming towards him.
Panel two: A giant wave a black, purple magic in the air.
Panel three: all the arrows break to thousand of pieces as the wave of magic continues threw them.
Panel four: A sword goes threw the stomach of the horseman that was next to Leader cage.
Panel five: Leader cage looks beside him to see what happened and only saw the dead horseman.
Page nineteen
Panel one:
Leader cage: Damn.
Panel two:
Leader cage: Get into groups and search for Hunter!!
Panel three: Hunter Jumps up a tree.
Panel four: Hunter lands on a branch.
Panel five:
Hunter: Why would my father try to kill me? Is it my strength? Or is it he wished for a normal son?
Panel six: Hunter leans his head back and closes his eyes for sleep as the moon lights the earth.
Hunter
Page one
Panel one: From a distance a black humanoid figure in a cloak with fifteen more behind move south in a snowy forest like area.
Panel two: Fifty men in silver chain Amour with oval round shields that have fairly large diamonds on them and saw like swords jump out of the forest charging toward them.
Hunter: Defensive positions! (He has a black cloak but you probably new that. Also the same sword as the soldiers)
Panel three: All fifteen soldiers turn toward the enemy in black chain armour with silver swords, slightly curved toward them.
Panel four: The fifteen men squat down a little with there swords In front of them.
Panel five: from the distance the fifteen men stand as they were with Hunter next to them in the same position, and the enemy charging toward them at least fifteen feet away.
Page two
Panel one: A chain like sword flies in the air with a little blood on it and next to it.
Panel two: One of the fifteen soldiers cut threw an enemy with his sword. An allied soldier next him almost on the ground.
Panel three: Hunterýs sword turns blackish, purple and easily cuts threw three enemy soldiers.
Panel four: An enemy soldier stabs an allied soldier in the stomach, his sword goes completely threw.
Panel five: Soon after the battle there were fifty enemy bodies lying on the ground, and two allied bodies.
Page three
Panel one:
Hunter: How many are dead?
Panel two:
Soldier: Two Sir.
Panel three: Hunter starts walking.
Hunter: Alright letýs keep moving.
Panel four: The men continue walking south.
Panel five:
Soldier: Sir how much longer until we finish the rout?
Panel six: Hunter turns his head.
Hunter: Soon.
Page four
Panel one: They come over a hill and see the enemy village.
Panel two: Hunter turns toward them.
Hunter: Iým sending you four of you back to the camp and tell them that weýve cleared the rout.
Panel three: Hunter points at four men and they leave for camp.
Panel four: At night twenty enemy soldiers come charging out of the forest like the last squad but with torches.
Page five
Panel one: The nine allied soldiers hop up as fast as they can.
Panel two:
Hunter: Defensive positions!
Panel three: All allied soldiers put there swords In front of them.
Panel four: eight of the enemiesý soldiers get hit by flaming arrows.
Panel five: the enemy start running back to the camp in fright.
Page six
Panel one: Eighty solders including the four that was sent for them marches toward hunter and his men.
Page seven
Panel one: The army halts.
Panel two: The leader walks up too Hunter in a cape and gray chain armour.
Panel three: Hunter starts walking towards him.
Panel four: They had had walked up too each other and looked each other in the eye.
Leader cage: Good work Hunter.
Hunter: Alright but Iým going to need to come with you.
Page eight
Panel one: The leader looks up.
Panel two: The leader looks back Into Hunters eye
Leader cage: We donýt need you for this.
Panel three: Hunter`s eyebrows go down.
Hunter: why wouldnýt you? Iým your son, Iým stronger then your entire army!
Panel four: Because We have enough men.
Page nine
Panel one:
Hunter: -Puts his head closer- I donýt care how many men you have! You donýt know how many soldiers there are in that village you cant just walk in there and win! Youýve only won when I sent in some of my men!
Panel two: Leader cage places his hand on Hunters shoulder.
Leader cage: -Places his hand on Hunters shoulder- (Sighs) Alright ill let you fight. Now get some sleep so we can take the village tomorrow.
Panel three:
Hunter: -Turns around-
Leader Cage: I will see you tomorrow.
Panel four:
Hunter: -Walks away-
Page ten
Panel one: The next morning the army brought out two trebuchets.
Panel two:
Hunter: Are they enough?
Leader cage: Yes. They donýt have very strong walls.
Panel three: The trebuchets stop in position.
Soldier: Ready!
Leader Cage: Fire!!
Panel four: the soldier swings his hammer toward the nail in the trebuchet.
Page eleven
Panel one: The trebuchets Lift up about too throw flaming boulders.
Panel two: The enemy run from the boulders as they fly towards there walls.
Panel three: The boulders hit the walls making an explosion.
Page twelve
Panel one: The Trebuchets Fire again.
Panel two: The flaming boulders fly towards the enemy walls.
Panel three: The Boulders destroy the walls making stone pieces fly.
Page thirteen
Panel one:
Leader Cage: Send in the Infantry.
Panel two:
Horseman: Send In the Infantry!!
Panel three: The two front rows of men start marching.
Page fourteen
Panel one:
Hunter: How many?
Leader cage: Thirty each row.
Panel two: Enemy arrows fly up in the air.
Panel three: The soldierýs squat down and the front row of men put there octagon shaped shields in front of them and the back soldiers put them in the air.
Page fifteen
Panel one: A couple allied soldiers fall to the ground.
Panel two: The soldiers put there shields down and start running.
Panel three: Allied archers fire arrows at the enemy helping the charging soldiers.
Panel four: The allied Infantry cut threw the enemy swordsman with there swords.
Panel five:
Leader cage: Ok hunter you can move in.
Panel six: Hunter and is men disappear in black fog.
Page sixteen
Panel one: All enemy soldiers fighting get pushed back by a long black line with a little purple outline.
Panel two: The enemy continue fighting back.
Panel three: One allied soldier Cuts threw an enemy`s leg.
Panel four: Hunter slams his sword onto an enemy`s helmet.
Panel five: Hunter looks around and sees the most of his allies had died from arrows that looked like they had come from his army`s direction thinking It was the enemy
Panel six: Fire all arrows.
Page seventeen
Panel one: Hunter Puts his sword threw an enemy`s stomach.
Panel two: A ton of enemy`s get hit by arrows from his allies. An arrow goes threw the back of his right shoulder.
Panel three: Hunter pulls the arrow out of his shoulder.
Panel four: Hunter puts some of his magic on his wound to stop the bleeding.
Panel five: Hunter raises his left hand at the enemy.
Panel six: Hunter than pushes the enemy back with full force with his magic causing a shock to the enemy giving them a heart attack making them die as soon as hit.
Page eighteen
Panel one: Hunter looks up in the air and sees a lot more arrows coming towards him.
Panel two: A giant wave a black, purple magic in the air.
Panel three: all the arrows break to thousand of pieces as the wave of magic continues threw them.
Panel four: A sword goes threw the stomach of the horseman that was next to Leader cage.
Panel five: Leader cage looks beside him to see what happened and only saw the dead horseman.
Page nineteen
Panel one:
Leader cage: Damn.
Panel two:
Leader cage: Get into groups and search for Hunter!!
Panel three: Hunter Jumps up a tree.
Panel four: Hunter lands on a branch.
Panel five:
Hunter: Why would my father try to kill me? Is it my strength? Or is it he wished for a normal son?
Panel six: Hunter leans his head back and closes his eyes for sleep as the moon lights the earth.