Max's Challange

[max]

The hall way to the Gym almost seemed endless. He was here with one mission & mission only: defeat the gy leader. A Typhloshin & Ninetails walk beside him as he entered the gym, eyes gazing around at it's interior.

Hello?! he hollared, his voice seeming to carry aroun the fighting area. Wow he breathed, which again it echoed. Flame looked round & took a few steps forward, a bit weary of this gym. Or maybe he was weary of all the gyms in this region. No one really knew.

[UmbreonGal]

[First of all when your character's talking use the quotation marks, that's what they're for.]

Kenji walked into the gym. "Looks like another challenger." The red haired man said.

[max]

Max's head spun to a man's voice, who seemed to have just entered the room. "Are you the gym leader?" he asked him. "If so, I'd like to battle you. If you do't mind, that is." Max's hand seemed to already be grabbing onto a Pokeball as Flame stepped back quickly to Max, supprised by the newcomer's entrance.

[UmbreonGal]

Kenji smiled. "Yep I'm the gym leader. I'm the only one so far that does double battles."

[max]

"Double battles?" Now Max was grinning now. "Then shall we start?" He held up the Pokeballs up to eye level, then threw them into the air. "Drakko, Ty, come on out!" Red light fourmed from the two, making shapes, & then Pokemon. The the light broke away, reviling a Tyranitar & a Dragonite. "REady when ever you are" he told the gym leader.

[UmbreonGal]

Kenji smiled and sent out his Suicune, Shunza, and his Buizle. "you go first."

[max]

Max nodded. Drakko he said. Ues guest! Ty, use magnitude!.

Drago! said the Dragon type as he launched into the air, his wings beating to make the air whip up in a feriousus guest. Ty roared, & then took one small jump, & when he landed, he made sure to wack both his tail & his torso onto the ground as hard as he could, to mke a strong magnitude.

[UmbreonGal]

"Into the air!" Kenji said. Shunza jumped upward, practically flying and Buizle used his Aqua Jet. "Now Surf!" The two water Pokemon nodded and flooded the field wit water.

[max]

Drago looked around as Ty lowered down, sniffing the water before standing straight again. But Max just smiled.

"Drago, use Guest!" Max comanded. "Full power! Ty, use roar!"

With sudden movemnt, the drgonite began flappng his wings quickly, whipping up the water easily. Ty put his head back, the lanched it, sending some of the water forward in almost a title wave.

[UmbreonGal]

[What is Guest?]

"Whirlpool!" Kenji called. Shunza nodded and began to rotate the water, forming the votex. Buizle dove into it, using his Aqua Jet to speed it up.

[max]

[Oh, sorry. Meant to put Gust]

Ty, use dig to dodge Max said. Ty did a short jump, then dove down into the earth, making a hole. Water followed him down, draining from the gym floor. Drakko, use your hyper beam to break up the whirlpool!

Drago! The dragonte began creating a small ball, then blasted forward at the whirlpool, making a Hyper Beam.

[UmbreonGal]

"Perfect. Shunza, Blizzard! Buizle into the hole with Aqua Jet!"
Shunza took a deep breath and fired off a chilling wind from her mouth, freezing the falling water and sending it at Dragonite.

[max]

"Now, Ty!" he shouted for his Pokemon. "Hyper Beam!" A sudden jolt made the ground shake, then dirt went flying, & a Hyper Beam, came bursting out of the ground, colliding with the Ice Beam. "Drakko, move!" said Max, & the Dragon Pokemon skidded to the left as shads of ice when flying his way.

[UmbreonGal]

Buizle burst from the ground and fired off Swift, the stars recoosheting off the ice shards and hitting Dragonite. "shunza, Surf!"